From e08358537960aa380c8d7b7b3263231a787ea475 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Trent Larson <trent@trentlarson.com>
Date: Tue, 24 Dec 2024 14:01:12 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] reword some onboarding phrases
---
src/components/OnboardingDialog.vue | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/components/OnboardingDialog.vue b/src/components/OnboardingDialog.vue
index c97b5b33..abea4ec9 100644
--- a/src/components/OnboardingDialog.vue
+++ b/src/components/OnboardingDialog.vue
@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@
</h1>
<p v-if="isRegistered" class="mt-4">
- You can now log things that you've received or witnessed:
+ You can now log things that you've seen:
<span v-if="numContacts > 0">
- click on {{ firstContactName }}'s name or
+ click on any name (like {{ firstContactName }}) or
</span>
click on the
<span class="bg-green-600 text-white rounded-full">
<fa icon="plus" class="fa-fw" />
</span>
- button to express your appreciation for... whatever -- like thanks for
+ button to express your appreciation for... whatever -- maybe thanks for
showing you all these fascinating stories of
<em>gratitude</em>.
</p>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
<p class="mt-4">
The more you illuminate cool things people are doing, the more you
- attract people to work together with you.
+ attract people to work with you.
</p>
<p class="mt-4 flex items-center">